Tuesday, May 12, 2015

Your Hair


Your hair sometimes smells like a rose garden with blooming roses
Like a candy store
With sweet lolipop
A bakery
With freshly baked cookies
A mixture of different perfumes
Like Early morning grass
A cup of water
An expired oil
A feral cat
With stinky fur 
Like a burning hay on the field 
Like an over baked cake
With strawberry topping
Like a pot of herbs 
In a traditional Chinese way
A cup of coffee
With no sugar 
A few drops of concentrated valilna 
In a well beaten egg white
Your hair sometimes feel like a bunch of dry hay
A bunch of fluff 
From a new born sheep
A piece of silk 
With small joints
A baby's hair 
Your hair sometimes looks like a nest
With some obvious weeds
Like a dark brown mushroom 
An uneven fence 
With black paint
Waves of ocean 
Willows in the park 
Like a warm winter hat 
That protects your ears in the harsh winter


2 comments:

  1. OMG this is amazing, good job mia!! I love how you used imagery in this poem because I can literally see all the images in my head:)

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  2. Great poem! I really liked how it stimulates the five senses and how it is completely random in a unique way. :)

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